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All graphics made are original to me. o: 
I have edited it and updated it in accordance to some feedback I've gotten. I wanted to avoid clutter, like you said, and I'm submitting this with a digital portfolio and a cover letter, so people will know a lot about me. xD 
I see what you mean about the pie-chart, I will fix that as well. I did that because I wanted to keep a consistent basic palette, but I understand it can be confusing. <3 Thanks!
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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It's not uncommon to find graphic designers that 'visualize' their resumes, so it's not shocking. Obviously you've censored things for identity protection, etc. but I feel it's a bit on the empty side. The number one thing that is bugging me is how much white there is. If it's going to be printed out, that would work just fine, since you could print it on whatever color paper you wanted, but a digital copy of it wouldn't pop as much.
The graphics are simple, and make a direct point of where you want it to go, but looking at the whole picture gives me the feeling that it all belongs on a business card; (I'm about to get off topic; one of those situations where my mind is running way too fast for my hands, so skip to the next paragraph to finish the critique.) which wouldn't be a bad idea, if you wanted to design one. I'd say keep the dimensions no bigger than a credit card, because I never keep business cards that don't fit in my wallet like a credit card. The business card would be like your cover letter, giving a quick brief of who you are and what you are and what you want with a web address. With all the experience that you have, I think a web site resume would be the best thing for you. There's plenty of free web host sites, so costs wouldn't be a problem as far as that's concerned.
Getting back on topic...What you're trying to accomplish is clear. While something like this has been done plenty of times before, you've made it yours. To answer the question in the description, It's a resume that would probably make it past the initial glance over while going through 100's of 1000's possible applications, it might not make it all the way if others have made resumes in the same fashion.
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