Daily Deviation
Given 2011-09-10
Goin' On Vacation by `SanguineEpitaph =
EastSideSunsets said: "
Goin' on Vacation is packed with detail. The opening of the car door, the exhaust fumes, the movement of the car as it drives...it's pixel perfect. The adorable little orange emote's expression is too cute, and the bouncing movement is amazing--the shadow, the squish, everything falls right into place!" (
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`Krissi001 )
The only less-positive things I have to say aren't very big--the emote is still wonderful as is. I think that when the emote walks to the car, when the screen cuts from one side to the other, it's a little too quick, not as smooth. Same when the emote is in the car and he starts driving and the screen cuts again. I think if it scrolled, it would be a lot smoother. Again, it's a minor detail. Another, even more minor thing is that when the car goes into the portal, there's a straight line where it disappears. It might look better if instead of the straight line, the inner edge of the portal is where it disappears. [I have no idea if you understand what I mean...am I making sense?]
This is a fantastic little emote. Great job. <3
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