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This is the nicest, most colorful comment I've ever gotten on my page! I wish I could keep it FOREVER. Thank you so much for gracing my page with such a lovely thing. 
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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✬.. Have a very beautiful day dear..✬
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I really appreciate it. 
I can see you are still struggling to find movement animations that your satisfied with, my suggestion here would be, for the blue one dragging the coin over, the seperate the movement of the coin and hands from the movement of the emote's body itself. Both need to keep moving in that direction but I think the idea of movement being a little delayed between those bits would give the emote a sort of 'weak arms' kind of action, although of course you don't see any arms, it just makes the object look heavier than the emote and creates the drag effect.
I also love the way you used dithering so well to shade everything, although I think it might be nice to add additional colour into the red area of the machine, although this could be quite hard, since even adding slightly different shades of slightly different hues always helps images to visually pop more than those that simply go from light to dark in the same hue (hope that made a little sense but trust me, it might not sound so logical but I've used it to great effect with coloured pencil drawings and it really works!)
The little gumballs are adorable and move well for the effect of being contained within the glass bowl. Qwerti's emotions are indeed not worth missing, although I still feel that the mouth moves a little too fast or out of time to accurately portray the effect of the entire emote's face moving to look in a different direction.
I can tell you've really put a HEAP of work into this, and I love the end result. Well done on keeping to your new years resolution and I can already see you improving in leaps and bounds. Make sure you keep up the hard work, I look forward to seeing you improve more!
I also noticed that you used the correct proportions between the emotes and the machine (how the machine and the coin were very large compared to the emote, showing that the emotes were small)!
Mechanically, it's also well done! Some of the colors could've popped more for me, just to get more of my attention. I also thought that it could've had a longer ending; maybe telling what happened to you when you got carried off by the blue emote, because in the scene you were just an orange gumball (so maybe you could of shown your character being eaten as you transformed back into an emote or something along those lines).
But overall, it was a very entertaining animation with an awesome story line and very well-drawn emotes! Great job!
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